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Second environment design for my Pre-Vis class.

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:iconvextrous:
Thats amazing. Everywhere you look, you see more of the eye motif. I like the big red X over that one in the foreground, that combined with the swirling star scape really takes this to a whole new dimension in my mind. I'm awestruck

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rarr!
:iconkimikana:
Oooo very dark and forbidding. Wonder what kind of people live there.

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"Where television invites passive acceptance and books invite detached analysis, games enjoin the player to passionate action."
:iconcartoonist4x:
Ah, I just noticed that the eye's been crossed out. A simple, yet effective queue that there's some story going on here. That and the colors, structures, lighting, and overall composition definitely "A" worthy, and I'm sure you can pull an "A" on this final project. If Dawson makes it another toss-up between you and I, I'll insist you get it... so that he'll have to give it to us both :D

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Catch you on the flip side,
Caleb
:iconjolieetoile:
I love, love, love the perspective here. It makes the viewer feel so tiny. Also, the repetition of the eye is ingenious--the town is watching, but does it actually see down to the depths of the city? The marked eye makes me think maybe not. This makes me want to build a whole story around the subterranean levels and what goes on down there that no one else can see.
:iconforgottenmyname:
I love this one. It has such a cartooney, doll-house type of feel, but at the same time the graffiti n the wall adds such realism. Wonderful job.

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Ana
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Fire.....O.o....What fire?!.....Oh....he he he.....>.<....that fire....
:iconhardship:
Wow, cool city. I like the style of the buildings, and the graffiti, which seems pretty foreboding... : D
:iconyzabel:
I like the feeling of this picture a lot. The perspective and the repeated eye pattern, added to the swirl of stars in the sky, give that street and town an oppressive and intriguing look, and it really seems that the watcher is actually watched from everywhere.

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